The Witches of the Sphinx #1 Errata List

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The Witches of the Sphinx #1 Errata List

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pg.4 "The Story So Far" section

wrong:

…she decided she wants to fly once again as a witch.

…she decided she wanted to fly once again as a witch.

 

pg.6 panel 2

wrong:

That's old man

General Patton's car!

correct:

That's the Old Man's…

General Patton's car!

 

pg.10 panel 1

wrong:

This particular young girl

came can from the east

--the far east.

correct:

The girl came from

the east…

--The farthest most east.

 

pg.13 panel 2

wrong:

One of own--

Land battle witch!

correct:

One of own--

Land battle witches!

 

pg.14 panel 4

wrong:

Attention--

Land Witch below!

correct:

Attention--

Land witch below!

 

pg.18 panel 1

wrong:

I am a general in the

Karsland Heer.

correct:

I am a general in the

Karlsland Heer.

 

pg.18 panel 2

wrong:

Imperial Fuso Army…

Sargent Furuko Kitano…

correct:

Imperial Fuso Army…

Sergeant Furuko Kitano…

 

pg.20 panel 1

wrong:

This is quite a luxury

to be able to shower

after a mission.

correct:

It's quite a luxury

to be able to shower

after a mission.

 

pg.22 panel 1

wrong:

Seeing the

Desert Fox himself--

General Rommel--

carrying you like knight

protecting his princess--

correct:

Seeing the

Desert Fox himself--

General Rommel--

carrying you in his arms like

a knight protecting his

princess--

 

pg.22 panel 3

wrong:

In any case,

for awhile you're stay

with me to get used to the

desert conditions.

correct:

In any case,

stay with me for a while

so you can get used to

the desert conditions.

 

pg.23 panel 5

wrong:

We'll be

right there.

correct:

…?

OK, we'll be

right there.

 

pg.26 panel 1

wrong:

There'd be some many

aerial witches from

different nations

in one place…

correct:

There'd be so many

aerial witches from

different nations

in one place…

 

pg.27 panel 3

wrong:

I won't stand for a

situation like this

any more that I have to.

correct:

I won't stand for a

situation like this

anymore than I have to.

 

pg.28 panel 3

wrong:

If we left it up to you,

you'd hold back until you had a

15 to 1 advantage and the witches

would be old dried up grannies.

correct:

If we left it up to you,

you'd hold back until you got a

15 to 1 advantage and turn the

witches into dried-up old grannies.

 

pg.28 panel 5

wrong:

One soldier exclaimed

that night:

"We were the luckiest men alive."

correct:

One soldier exclaimed

on that night:

"We were the luckiest men alive."

 

pg.28 panel 5

wrong:

"We got a ring side seat

to this century's greatest fight

between three generals."

correct:

"We got a ring side seat

to this century's greatest fight

between the three generals."

 

pg.30 panel 2

wrong:

I've requested

for your presence

for very important

mission…

correct:

I've requested

your presence

for a very important

mission…

 

pg.31 panel 4

wrong:

This parts the spot upon which

a fellow comrade from Fuso

traveled over 1000km and

headed mother nature's call.

correct:

This marks the spot upon which

a fellow comrade from Fuso

traveled over 1000km and

headed mother nature's call.

 

pg.32 panel 2

wrong:

She's certainly grew fond of you quick.

correct:

She's grown fond of you quick, didn't she?

 

pg.32 panel 4

wrong:

I've always had

an interest becoming

a stylist and such…

correct:

I've always had

an interest in becoming

a stylist and such…

 

pg.33 panel 1

wrong:

That I should become

a witch and recruited me.

correct:

--That I should become

a witch and recruited me.

 

pg.34 panel 2

wrong:

You know,

you're just talking

about scope--

correct:

You know, if

you're just talking

about scope--

 

pg.37 panel 2

wrong:

Our zone is

boarded by Liberion and

Karlsland units!

correct:

Our zone is bordered

by Liberion and

Karlsland units!

 

pg.38 panel 1

wrong:

So what if boogie

bypasses both

the Miles group

and us?

correct:

So what if

the boogie bypasses

both the Miles group

and us?

 

pg.40 panel 2

wrong:

ーー砂漠も

たまには

= ヌケ =

correct:

ーー砂漠も

たまには

At times, even in the desert--

 

pg.40 panel 2

wrong:

こういう

日もある

At times, even in the desert--

correct:

こういう

日もある

There are days like this.

 

pg.41 panel 3

wrong:

Excellent, excellent.

Keep coming, coming

correct:

Excellent, excellent.

Just keeping coming…

 

pg.46 panel 1

wrong:

--Of you,Generals!

correct:

--Of you, Generals!

 

pg.53 panel 1

wrong:

--Into a complete ?asco?

correct:

--Into a complete fiasco?

 

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I will fix at The Witches of the Sphinx #1 Second Edition.(Takeshi NOGAMI)




 

 





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